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homage to jai..?much better but composition too busy. mesti tau bila nak benti jgn get carried away.petai tu dah focal point dah, ko kacau dgn yg lain2. intensiti kaler bckgrnd dia perlu subdued sikit, about 3 to 5 on the greyscale. kurang narrative, perlu compactkn storytelling, baru mantap.postkn work yg sama genre supaya senang detect 'real intention'. yg pelbagai tak jelas halatuju.
i'm not an art student/ professional but i think you make great art! keep it up!
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homage to jai..?
much better but composition too busy. mesti tau bila nak benti jgn get carried away.
petai tu dah focal point dah, ko kacau dgn yg lain2. intensiti kaler bckgrnd dia perlu subdued sikit, about 3 to 5 on the greyscale.
kurang narrative, perlu compactkn storytelling, baru mantap.
postkn work yg sama genre supaya senang detect 'real intention'. yg pelbagai tak jelas halatuju.
i'm not an art student/ professional but i think you make great art! keep it up!
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